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A Purpose-Driven Couple

August 16, 2018 Holly Simmons
Dante and Amal Disparte, Goucher '00

Dante and Amal Disparte, Goucher '00

On its face, this was a pretty straightforward assignment I received from Goucher College: Write a short profile of an alum. He founded a strategy risk and insurance advisory firm. He's married to another Goucher alumna. Go to. 

In reality, working on the story was a good reminder of some of the lessons I've picked up in my years as a writer and journalist:

  • Don't be afraid to ask the dumb questions: I have no earthly idea what "strategy risk and insurance advisory firm" means. 
  • Don't be stymied by the assignment. Find a way to make the story interesting to a wide readership. He works in risk management. Okay. I could ask him some very dry, technical questions ... or I could ask what sort of role risk has played in his personal life. Hey, it's not a trade magazine. 
  • Find the romance. Who's not a sucker for a love story? The fact that the story set up my primary subject's partner to be an equal participant was fortuitous. And with a line like "we disliked each other immediately," I knew there was a good story there. 
  • Find the humanity. I don't care for stories that are just about someone's job. I want to know about the person behind the job. I had a colleague who used to ask subjects "what's your origin story?" I shamelessly stole that move, and I use it in as many interviews as I can. I don't want to just know what you do, I want to know what drives you to do it. 

I'm fairly pleased with how the story turned out. But read it for yourself. 

https://blogs.goucher.edu/magazine/living-lives-of-purpose/

In Articles, Clients, Higher Education, Profiles, Work, Writing Tags Goucher College, Dante Disparte, college ro, college romance, purpose-driven couples
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